I am enjoying this series.
Well done! Is it just me or was this episode way longer than your first? I don't remember.
The story is well done, I enjoy these fantasy adventures. The music tracks and sound are great, I especially find that "Ancient Asia" theme you use exceptional, which one is that? I would like to add it to my collection. However...why did you rip the other sounds from everquest? Just kidding, there was nothing everquest about them. Actually my only concern is sometimes the pitch was a little off and times such as when the prince was screaming it lacked clarity.
Your art is excellent, and the animation is fairly smooth.
I noticed some spelling and grammatical errors in your subtitles though. Fairly minor, maybe you just missed them. I do think your script is well thought out though!
Anyway I am eagerly awaiting episode three, ciao for now.