really good
ok it was an awesome flash but the voice acting was kind of bad..... like alot of voices just sounded like u read them off a page with no enthusiasm. thats my only complaint but other than that good work man keep it up i look foward to episode 3.
Good use of angles!
I really liked this episode. I thought some of the camera angles were really creative and added a lot to the piece as a whole. The sound quality could have been better but nothings perfect. The story line really pulls you in! Cant wait for the next one!
Well...
I've seen all of your work here on newgrounds and I am very impressed! I especially enjoyed your tribute to Warhammer 40,000!!! I myself play and have a space marine and Imperial gaurd army. You've done well for the Emporer and the game but the droppods fell a little short, in the next episode I think that it would make many people happy if you displayed the pods in their true form.
Questions:
1. Do you play Warhammer 40k?
2. If so... What army(armies) do you collect?
3. How many other episodes will there be?
4. Will an actual story develope in future episodes?
5. Can you please include Imperial Gaurd in a future episode?
P.S. If you plan on adding imperial guard please do not just have them get slaughtered:)
---Comrade_K-rad
Pretty good work.
I think the only thing were the spelling and grammar errors. It wouldn't hurt to give your shit a spell check before submitting it. It doesn't help when I have twenty plus spelling and grammatical errors staring me in the face. Otherwise, totally awesome work.
Good, but...
I liked basically everything but the way you drew the characters... But the surroundings and backgrounds and stuff were really well done. Congradulation on those.