This was really good.
The only problems I had with it are the same 2 as last time. Well though better this time there was the one voice that was extremely low, I mean it was better then last time but still needs just a little more improvements. Also I know you like samarui swords but, it looks weird to see knights holding katanas. They should have longswords, broadswords, or claymores. I mean it really isn't that big of a deal and it was really good other then that.
Could be excellent but...
Please do something with the sound, it's better than the first one but there is still work to be done. The scene in the darkness are too dark, I would like to see the characters a little to get the plot. The story is going good tought, this gonna get interesting.
I like it
I like it but it could be so much better! You gotta work on the dialog alot. Like the messenger dude if he really talked to the king like that he'd be like fucking killed, and the fact that everyone has a badass attitude doesnt work out. Next, the why are you doing this thing was kinda gay you should've just made it short and sweet like "you bastard." And last of all whats up with the whole green energy thing in the episodes why doesnt the black knight guy just use it constantly to defeat his enemies and, if its like a limited energy thing make it show that its hurting him when he uses it, I think you should stray away from the whole super power energy blast and get more envolved in the acutal sword fighting cuz if the black knight is just gunna blast them why give him a fucking sword. Well thats all i got to say im curious to see how your next episode turns out.
The moreI see, the more i hate it.
I am getting pretty tired of the guy who can tear apart a whole castle with a swing of his hand but barely gets to push away an enemy with it... Also sound sucks cock, and by sounds i mean the voices, and how they were acted aside from that the music was ok. The dialogs are retarded, like for example... "So listen up because i am only going to explain this once" right to the king, dumbshit, or the part where i almost laughed "It'll be an honor to kill the prince of loklair" and the retard replies "Whatever your plans are I will not be a part of them" ... what plans, he wants to kill you... OH, I almost forgot, "welcome" to where dumbass?
Oh also i loved the grammar mistake dude, tomorraw, ahhahahaa.
Nice job with the backgrounds and graphics...
Well...
I gave it what it deserved - and a 6 it was. The voice acting was OK, thank god you wrote it too. The violence, eh, it was ok. Interactivity, well, it ran nicely. Graphics were ok, and the style two. You lost a good two point because you spelled tomorrow wrong. =P Work on your spelling, and continue to work on Flash, you have come farther than I have, I have to work at flash, but you seem to have a natural talent for it. Keep pumping Flashes out, and you will be a pro in no time. =D