This was really good.
The only problems I had with it are the same 2 as last time. Well though better this time there was the one voice that was extremely low, I mean it was better then last time but still needs just a little more improvements. Also I know you like samarui swords but, it looks weird to see knights holding katanas. They should have longswords, broadswords, or claymores. I mean it really isn't that big of a deal and it was really good other then that.
I like this, but....
Something needs to be done in regards to making the spoken dialogue more synchronized. Sometimes they're loud, sometimes soft, and in this one at one point the King of Locklair had a loud echo that none of the other voice cast had to his voice. I understand it can be difficult when working with various talents, but there must be a way to keep it more level.
The animation is pretty good, and the story....well, the story is still evolving, and I will wait and watch, and see where it goes. This has a lot of potential, and you certainly do possess animation skills. I shall await the next installment.
As for the name of the mushroom, Shittake or Shiitake are acceptable, but the original Japanese to English spelling was Shiitake. You probably already know this, but just FYI anyways. I personally prefer Shiitake....I have too often seen the other form used derogatively. BTW, I am NOT suggesting you change the name in any way, shape or form! I'm just making an innocent comment. =^-^= NEways, keep up the good work!
this series could develop well...
It's okay, but the major problem that seemed to glare was the voice/subtitle work. Especially the subtitles that were misspelled, quoted incorrectly, and with grammatical flaws. That may be nit-picking, but it was the biggest flaw overall.
Could be excellent but...
Please do something with the sound, it's better than the first one but there is still work to be done. The scene in the darkness are too dark, I would like to see the characters a little to get the plot. The story is going good tought, this gonna get interesting.
I repeat what I said about the other one
The sound has improved but the voice acting is still awful. You shouldn`t do it all by yourself, call 3 or 4 of voice actors.