Not too bad
I liked it personally, I have a thing for fantasy stories though.
There was some difficulty about the sound, in the beggining it seemed like the music was the central focus, not the voices.
I think you should definitely keep up with the story, it has great potential.
The choice of music later in the flash was excelent...I commend you on it.
screw everone else...I like it
just keep doing what your doing
i'm looking forward to chapter 2
(^.^)
voice acting...
you should consider finding other voice actors as well.. the main problem i saw was the fact that both the antagonist and the the protagonist had the same voice which makes it very confusing to figure out whos saying what in the fight scene. also the face of the prince the shots didnt make sense , one time he had long hair the next the side of his face was shaven?
I say it was pretty good
A lot of the flash looks like a lot of work with frame-by-frame. YAY EFFORT!
I have to say your voice acting isn't bad, however, try and change it a little more in between characters. I know it can be hard sometimes but trust me it worth it! ^.^
If there's anything I didn't like about the flash was at some parts you made a character look two-dimensional even if he had all that shadowing in him. However, I know it can be hard sometimes when you're using that transforming tool in flash.
The story's good though. I look forward for chapter three!
Some stuff u might wanna work on for next time
watch ur captions and stick to ur script!!! I found alot of mistakes in it and I'm not talking about grammar! There was extra script and a few spelling mistakes but aside from that it wasn't half bad. You might want to try and research the time period a little more. No one talks like that back in that age even if it is fictional. *sorry really bad critic but truely I liked this* The music covered the vocals to and it really takes away from it. I missed half the stuff in the begining! Otherwise ur animation was kick ass and the story line is pretty good to. Good job really needs a lil tweek tho!