good animation
could the intro get any longer?
make another button that explains the story if people want to read it that way we dont have to read at a preset speed
it was good when you finally made it to the video but cut the intro add a story button
Good
Overall it was great since this is only your second flash?
I'm not sure... anyways!
Very good but you didn't have to end it early on my account...
Intro takes WAAAAY too long...
all that waiting and reading for a sprite movie...man that was like 1:30 seconds of just pure intro...change that up or shorten it completely...
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Meh...