This is your first submission?!
Well, good job then!:) Nice to know someone actually does something more than sticks or clocks as their first-born... It could of course have been better, but I liked it alright. Keep it up.
Reviews for "A Short Litle Story"
its pretty good
you can draw pretty good and the animation was smooth, its dam good for a first flash so therefore i have a small doubt that it is, but if you say so...
anyway great flash, you could make some awesome movies in the future
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~~REVIEW~~
Well a decent but cute little flash, with some really nice work on the characters, lots of great detail, not a bad flash at all, i was pleased, with the outcome...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not much to improve on as it was already good, maybe some darker backrounds as there were abit hard to see and such...
~~OVERALL~~
A cute short but entertaining flash with great characters...
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Nice...
That was great for a first flash, everything was good all execept the lip-sync, that will need looking at, Apart from that it was good.
Short, not very sweet
Not too bad. Drawings are good, but the sound was too low and the swearing was not necessary.
Try a more tasteful short story next time.
2/5