Great
Not bad at all but two things:
1. Who wears sweatshirts and long pants on September 3? Isn't it usually still pretty warm September 3?
2. After he got punched at the way end, how did he end up with a black eye, a bloody nose, and a scratched left cheek when he got hit once on his left side, and landed on his right cheek?
Maybe I'm being too critical. Good job.
Its got a message thats what counts!
This was great , a message which is very true , i believe most of the ppl who will view this are the type of people who understand it (most people) were i come from , the so called kool kids are usally some black himie like dude or a whining little wigga , the potrayle of the so-called normle kids in this was a little harse on nerdy kids but i get what it represents , but where i am the different kids , especially my very different friends ive seen them all beat up and bloodied even my own brother has been attacked so i understan how this works
hahahaha
kinda reminds me of my highschool days only difference is I was the one doing the ass kicking.
OH MY FRICKIN GOD, YOUR FRICKIN AWESOME!!!
I CAN FRICKIN RELATE! AWESOME FRICKIN FLASH DUDE! NEED SEQUAL, NEED IT NOW, Dude hurry and get the sequal done if theres gonna be one!
DAMN!
THAT WAS GOOD.MAKE A SEQUEL OR SUMTHIN.