Nice
Yes I really enjoyed this flash. Question though if this is episode one then why did he kill himself, I mean how is there going to be a chapter two? Ok the writing was very good although you took to long on it. The part about the mirror was very nice. I would really like to see you make more of these flashes they are aweseome.
it going to show the afterlife
Very good
I can't wait for the next one
Good job!
I love the animation and the sound quality is very good. The plot is intriguing and I'd like to see more. The only problem I have is the typo issue. You might want to run everything through a spell checker before you put it into the movie.
Most of the spelling it the note was a mistake but when i looked back it seemed to work and the bit at the end with Comitted spelt wrong was from a internet article and it was speltr wrong there come to think of it without knowingb the site its a pretty bad ref
Deep
I'm not sure how you can forge a series out of this plot, but that just makes it all the more enticing. Your art needs a little work and you the character's face should of been less bulky. Other then that it was an excellent flash. I hope to see more of your work, quite soon.
the next part of the plot shows his afterlife (i just relised he hasnt got a name) you will have to trust me there a lot of plot to come i would say about 8 episode before it gets old.
Very original, very interesting.
It is good to look at a submition that isn't founded on ass gass and/or some song.
The story itself is interesting but as this doesn't take as long as, let's say, Bitey you could have made the mans face better and the talking it self too. It was very stylish but the sound is pretty bad especially on my speakers.
All in al it is a good one, improve the sound and make the graphics a bit more elaborate and I'll give you another W00t all my 5 R belong to this :)