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Reviews for "White ep1"

Nice

Yes I really enjoyed this flash. Question though if this is episode one then why did he kill himself, I mean how is there going to be a chapter two? Ok the writing was very good although you took to long on it. The part about the mirror was very nice. I would really like to see you make more of these flashes they are aweseome.

Frogcloset responds:

it going to show the afterlife

Good job!

I love the animation and the sound quality is very good. The plot is intriguing and I'd like to see more. The only problem I have is the typo issue. You might want to run everything through a spell checker before you put it into the movie.

Frogcloset responds:

Most of the spelling it the note was a mistake but when i looked back it seemed to work and the bit at the end with Comitted spelt wrong was from a internet article and it was speltr wrong there come to think of it without knowingb the site its a pretty bad ref

Hmm...

I suppose that it is easy to be sarcastic about a persons view of murder/suicide, which can make a flash like this easy to mock. However, I felt something genuine in your flash and it made me sit back and consider it before I judged too quickly. I think that Quietmessenger144 said it best when he described the frailty of life and how episotic it is. --"Because that's all life is sister, a series of moments" -Dogma. The thing I don't like, is isntead of voicing this thought provoking opinion, he simply kills himself. But it's a series, I'll be interested to see where you go with it, nice work.

pretty good

It seems like it could be a cool series, but this episode was pretty much just him writing a letter. The sound was pretty good, and the graphics were good, i guess, but it could have had a bit more actual movement. But i'm still waiting for the next one- it seems like it could be a really interesting story.
And by the way, what was the font on the letter? That was cool.

Frogcloset responds:

the fonts called grunge can remember what site its from didnt want much movement in this one wanted to give the feeling that everything was dead and just have light movement flickering flashing white light (get it)

nice job

rather morbid, but so is life i suppose