Not terrible... not spectacular...
OK, fair and honest review...
The sound could be improved - you went from way too loud to suddenly cutting to silence or very near it... this felt way too trite... I think that a more subtle soundtrack that built up slowly would have been more effective in increasing tension. As it is it felt like watching one of those cheesy 50's B-movie horror flicks... The graphics weren't bad but there really wasn't much to them - never showing the character at all - could go either way with this. I understand using the 'point of view' for dramatic effect but I also felt like the only reason you didn't show a character was that you couldn't draw a decent one... Not saying that you can't just saying it felt that way... Overall though it was a decent effort and the twist at the end (although nothing to piss oneself over) was a little humorous...
Work on the sound man! I think that if this were scored better (music core not point score), you'd get higher ratings.
Decent job - keep it up as if nothing else it was in fact original...