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Reviews for "Nightmare On Floor 53"

As long as you were new !1

Look, i do not beleive that this flash could take a second more than one hour to finish, so do not try to lie.

PROS:-
-yOUR first flash, good step forward
-You stayed dedicated (as you say) and that getting better animations needs dedication.

HOW TO GET BETTER:-
-You need to practice drawing more
-Get a style of your own, that would encourage originality. (an example is the MADNESS series, or Legendary Frog Series) You should find a way of art work that defines you.

GOOD TRY.. HOPE TO SEE MORE.

SuperDuck-Spanjj responds:

thanx for the advice but why would i lie about how long it took? :S

What?

What the hell was that? thats worse than marmite.

Quite a few things you could spruce up.

if you want to create an eeree atmosphere, the first thing you could try is to not have such vivd colours within your film. Remember that colours don't have to correspond to how they look in real life. Manipulate your colours teh way you would with your composition. For instance, If a character is wearing jeans, they don't have to be blue. A viewer will accept almost anything so long as it's believable in the context of your movie. In the case of your flash, try not to use just a black screen to represent darkness, give us outlines of objects within the room, making us know it's dark, but want to see farther into the room. There are so many scary implications when you can immerse yourself like that. There were compositional choices you could make too to get a better effect. You could have had the can REALLY big perspectively in the foreground so that it takes up almost half the screen. Then, when the character opens the door in the background, the light from the hall lights up the words "red paint" on the bucket. And the guy just keeps screaming when he sees it.

Anyway, nice effort on it. Maybe research some composition basics and try substituting colours in ways you wouldn't think before.

SuperDuck-Spanjj responds:

hey thats some excellent advice, thanks for taking the time to write the review. ill defo try to do some of that :)

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could be better

SuperDuck-Spanjj responds:

hokey kokey

oh my gosh no good to me sorry!

i did not like this film to short....way to short!!!!!1

SuperDuck-Spanjj responds:

next time, i shall make sumthing so long that u will never see the end! muahahaha! :P tanx for the review anywhoo