What is this tripe!
The crap-ness of this might have worked if it was a comedy,but its just too crap to take seriously!
Reviews for "Warhammer:Montau Broken"
loooooool
i just liked the song:OD
Disgraceful.
Seriously, you know nothing about the tau. The TAu are Non-Malicous. Before taking someone out, they ask them to join the greater good. if they refuse.. basicly they die. The Mont-Au, or the great 'death' was before the ethereals came to bring peace, during this time all four castes were in an endless war. the fire caste being the strongest. when the ethereals came the stopped the war, and told of the greater good! when this happened all four casted made a treaty and vowed never to go back to the Mont'Au again.. when they were in war. Thus, because of this great peace they could utilise all the castes abilities. thus, leading to a greater technological balance far greater than humanity.
Though, a few things to keep in mind.. Tau can be killed by guardsman in close combat, the arent the most revered of the races. and.. i doubt chaos would care about them.. the marines would kill tau quickly in close combat... and well, keep in mind the things.
Were you thinking at all when you did this?
Very poor, the whole thing is rushed and pathectic, have you even read Codex: Tau? and Space Marines are way stronger than that, and they dont run at the first mishap, and dont use pictures of the actual models... DRAW THEM YOURSELF!
THINK before you do anymore flash anmations!
sorry, but this really is bad
the animation is terrible and the storyline is bad. everything about it is pretty bad. i can appreciate your effort in this though. its clear that your a beginner and trying to learn so thats good. just keep working on everything. practice makes perfect.
BTW = tau , if you will notice, have hooves. not feet.
suggestions:
1.improve the animation. watch other animations and drawings and study the styles VERY CAREFULLY. then practice doing them.
2.research up on the backstory of Warhammer 40k
3.make a more coherant plotline (what planet, what system. why when who what where? just remember to make things a bit more clear)
4.learn to use flash better, there are a lot of tutorials and stuff online. also if you look hard enough there will be people willing to teach you and im sure most flash artists will be more than happy to give you tips.
5.like in number 1, observe flash films or movies and how the characters move. theres a specific way people walk and move and how light reflects and positioning. look at it carefully and try to remember it and be able to immitate it in your movies.
6.the shadow in that battle scene goes too high. (SHADOWS DONT GO ON THE SKY)
7.pace it better. and maybe use some voices or place the text boxes better.
this needs LLOTS of work. id scrap it and make a new one.