Nice work
This is definitely one of those conclusion songs, that you'd see at the end of a TV series on the last episode. I like the strings, the overall feel. But there doesn't seem to be much of a defined melody. I heard it in the piano before, but now it's gone into a solo a bit.
One suggestion I have is to try layering this song. It starts about a bit heavy right away. you could add each part as you go, as it tends to lend itself to be one of those looped and layered pieces.
I plan on coming back and doing another rendition eventually, when I can make it a little more professional and add a proper conclusion. :]
Wow beautiful
This is absolutely beautiful I really love how this starts off and plays through every sound and beat it really drives itself with some nice and intense feel it's one of those types that would make someone cry and I would love to hear a solo guitar on this but that's just me but very nice work here anyways really good sound here keep that quality going strong
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a guitar solo or vibe but other then that this don't need changes
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ehhhh
i like the piano version so much better
its good tho, im not hating tho its my style.
Everyone has their own opinion and styles. :]