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Reviews for "Playground"

Advice.

Alright, so here's some advice, which hopefully you'll get a chance to read.

First: Don't go on a rant about how "dumb and fucked" your audience is where they can hear you. This will make people pissed off and make even a good submission get a crappy score.

Second: Jealosy has nothing to do with it. You've submitted a work thats not all to great and has made it to the front page where it will get more viewers than before. More viewers means more votes, and in this case, after submitting this and insulting everyone, that means many more BAD votes.

Third: Try using characters that arent just stick figures with rounded bodies and limbs.

Fourth: Lots of blood doesn't make violence any more amusing unless its deployed in a comical way, for example: the Black Knight scene in Monty Python's Search for the Holy Grail.

Fifth: Give people a reason to enjoy it. Having a little kid swing back then appear with a sword in its head isnt all that amusing, in fact its kind of lame. Speed it up a bit, add extra details that make it interesting.

Sixth: Ditch lame, badsounding audio loops. That fountain at the beginning for example, that was aweful, and it looped over and over before the scene change.

Hopefully you can do better next time.

Well, well, well,

Well sir, you have shown yourself to be a complete assfuck. I found this animation to be a complete waste of time. Not only my part, but your's as well. But here is some constructive criticism before you start crying and whining when someone opens your eyes to the suckiness of this cartoon:
Graphics left much to be desired, didn't really have a specific style nor did they have any life-like feel. I felt bored with it and found that if I fell asleep on a mouse I could draw that.
There was a real absence of any thought or creativity on part of how the killings took place. I'm not even a violent person and I could make that up.
And humor... Well... The only thing that made me laugh was you saying this place was fucked when you're the one contributing this mindless crap that a 12 year old would feel at home with (no offense to the 12 year old).

Well..

I did like the violence in this.. Really made up for my bad day today. Hope that didn't sound too emo. But, good for some laughs. A 9 for you.

Sorry dude...

Actually, You're the one who needs to go. you're flash skills are lacking, and it seems like a clone of so many other things. Try something original and unique. You're animation sucked too, and the music was repetative and obnoxious. Just like the blood in your kiddie cartoon. Keep your stuff to yourself if you can't take harsh criticism.

seriously...

The animation was sloppy, the transitions and... well, just about everything else was ridiculously slow. You made a 10 second animation waste 3 minutes of my time. The sound loops were incredibly sloppy, the senseless killer was a clear rip of a Homestar Runner character, and the sound effects were poorly mixed cheesy stock sound. I wouldn't have bothered reviewing this however, if your "info" about this piece wasn't so terribly arrogant. While there is a lot of bad stuff on Newgrounds, there is also a lot of talent floating around here. I don't feel that you are part of that, but you should be happy that someone around at Newgrounds thought so. for shame. seriously. shame.