Actually sir....
The probable cause to your point drop is the sheer and simple fact that your animation just isn't top knotch. There are some really good animations that have custom scores on this website, and games that require so much actionscripting it would make your head spin. This animation as such had a couple of tweens. It was smooth... which is important... but it isn't something that makes me feel like crudloads of time went into developing a story or characters. In fact, I believe more and more that this character is the bastard son of the poopsmith and the madness character. Tips to avoid this mess in the future:
-Frame by Frame animations are more realistic than tweens in most cases.
-Story linked with Audio. Dramatic music during important scenes, you know... it really makes a difference.
-A DIFFERENT TRANSITION! (or so help me god.......)
-Voice Acting. (with a good mike and mix program...)
-A plot.
there are other things, but these are the basics. These things really make the difference between a mindless and pointless 1 min. video and a movie.
Cheers,
-A