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"However none were to succed." Succed?
Reviews for "the umpire strikes back"
seriously folks
this wasn't the worst thing I've seen on newgrounds, but it was made so much worse by your total lack of punctuation.
Umm...
I'm just gonna pretend I never saw this.
Not NG Material
However, I liked the story. The graphics really sucked which shows you need to spend more time on your backgrounds and graphics. The sounds are good mainly because you didn't create them. The "black screen saying your computer cant handle the blood" is an old, old animators trick when he's uh, too lazy to animate it?
Try harder, earn your mates story some respect,
~Slapjack