good
its pretty good, but i agree with Kikiko, it went a little too far
Reviews for "the umpire strikes back"
too far
I think it would have been funnier if you finished with darth vader slicing tha ball. You went a little too far here. Joke became lame with the violence, just stop after the plot.
Not NG Material
However, I liked the story. The graphics really sucked which shows you need to spend more time on your backgrounds and graphics. The sounds are good mainly because you didn't create them. The "black screen saying your computer cant handle the blood" is an old, old animators trick when he's uh, too lazy to animate it?
Try harder, earn your mates story some respect,
~Slapjack
Umm...
I'm just gonna pretend I never saw this.