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Reviews for "the umpire strikes back"

Not to bad, however...

I admit, I'm a bit of a grammar nazi, so first of all: work on your spelling and grammar! If you don't it looks trashy and not many people will like it. The animation itself was just fine, however, you really just relied on one lame joke, namely Vader sabering the guy. Try to add some more humor into it and don't put dark red font on black backgrounds, as it can be hard to see. Blood red or not, it's useless to have text if readers must strain their eyes to read it. Shorts like this require you to REALLY be sure your work is quality, because if not they can't really measure up to the longer ones. Anyways, keep going, and good luck!

constructive feedback????

here it is:

- not funny at all
- story? where?
- sound loops reason for my new migraine

you could have made more out of it. the intro was cool, just like the original. but if i was george lucas, i would have poked your head against the death star...though im not a star wars fan: plz, don't fck it up like that.

okay

I thought this was going to be a movie about baseball but instead it's about cricket? Graphics look like they could be better than this. But that's funny though.. they just kept throwing red balls at darth vader.. I wish the story itself was much longer than that though.

Boring

Good luck on your next one!

Check your spelling

"However none were to succed." Succed?