A mouthful..
I don't know what you were trying to get people to think about.. from this beat.. I don't know how you work..( like what you set out to accomplish when you create a song)
Anyways, I listened to the whole thing... and then once more.
To me.. it was overwhelming.. there was so much in it.. (least it seemed that way) that I didn't know what to focus on.. I really didn't know where it was headed.
No visual images popped up in my head.
It was like a ride that somewhat abruptly stops and goes.. or changes elevation. Geez.. don't know how to put into words..
I couldn't get into it. I zoned out.
Of course this is my opinion, so don't take it to heart. Everyone has different taste.
Again, really liked your creation 'Beautiful Darkness'