Heres an idea that might give it a better score
But a button to go to the actual game istead of having to read the tutorial first. People might think you can't actually play it.
Reviews for "Fishy Tutorial!"
VENGEANCE-GGG responds:
It's only a few clicks away...
This is a first from me....
This is the first time that I have EVER EVER EVER gave somebody a good score for a game engine, demo, etc. etc. but you are the first...I actually know these type of games, flash and shockwave but this is probably the crappiet gayest one of all but I see where you rollin with it. Just...tweak it man and dont submit another like this or I might not be so nice next time...1 thumb up t('.')
VENGEANCE-GGG responds:
Thanks. I've also made an FPS tutorial, if you're interested.
that was horrible
that was the worst ever, it took me like a mintue to get it to play, there are not buttons or anything at the begining, and it doesnt auot-play, u have to right click and hit play, plus when i did that it went through the entire tutorial in about asecond and i had to hit play again for it to start @ the first slide only there were fish all over the place, you should learn how to make a flash functional before ever actually making a tutorial, other than tha i liked it though
VENGEANCE-GGG responds:
Try clicking the 'Play' button. You know, the bit of text that says "Play?" and lights up when you put your cursor over it? From there you can navigate through it by clicking on the arrows. Why are you suggesting that I can't make Flash functional? Is it just because you don't notice the buttons? Sigh. In future, try pressing tab to highlight any buttons on the stage.
sucked
the instructions where too long and baiscly you just coppied the fishy game
VENGEANCE-GGG responds:
Sigh. So here's one person who thinks I did it in too much detail instead of too little. is it too much to ask for you to actually try reading it? It's meant to show you what to do to make a game. How much simpler could I make it? If you don't have the patience to read through the tutorial, then you're hardly likely to be able to make the game, are you?
Copied the Fishy game? I believe that was implied by the title... Fishy Tutorial.
hehehe....
good enough......
that game you can also play on the new motorola
actually i thin the idea is stolen
butt that isn't a crime i think :D
VENGEANCE-GGG responds:
Nowadays, almost all ideas have been used one time or another. How am I supposed to write a tutorial for a game if I'm then going to be accused of stealing the idea? How can one not be 'stealing' an idea whilst writing a tutorial? Tutorials are meant to teach you how things are done. It's physically impossible to write a tutorial about something that hasn't been done.