Reviews for Amatuer Invisibility: 2

[M-A-R-C-U-S]

thats some great stuff right there

hmm, seems like there have been a couple of these collaborations around lately! - animating to something in the audio portal, its a good idea!
now, i would have given this an 8 out of 10... but TESM's movie doesnt freakin work! and the screenshot looked really awesome too! gah... o well, ill review the other ones :)
RazorJam - very fun to watch, yours was. i would say out of the 3 i saw i probably liked this one the most, because it was the least depressing! haha.
i quite like your style of animation, and it was pretty darn smooth. it looked really good on that background, but it just would have been so much better without the use of stick figures.
Jszostak - after spelling your name im inclined to write less! hahaha. i think yours was pretty darn good also. the graphics were great, and everything was really well drawn, and seemed pretty abstract. i very much liked your use of greys and blacks on the objects in the city.
the 'story line' of the animation was pretty good, and i was most pleased with the 'happy ending', haha. the song was also really good. it had a cool beat, and that little sped-up voice in the background was alright aswell.
NeverHoodDrew - an excellent song, and i was impressed that someone made that in the audio portal! its not very often that you come across a song with vocals like that in it on this site, so good choice. also, i think that the animation in this movie was awesome. the 'wind' effect on the character looked very realistic, and the fact that you made it seem as though the character himself was singing, made it all the more like a real music video.
on the whole, i was most impressed by all 3 of the available movies to watch here (stupid button for TESM's movie!). you all have unique styles of animating that went pretty well together, and the songs you all choosed were pretty cool. well done.
7.5/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!!)

[S-K]

Woah

Weird set of movies but entertaining to watch for different reasons. What I'm still trying to work out is how you programmed a clock in the first movie (something I intend to use in one of my best movie ideas), what the words say under the magnifying glass in the 2nd and why the 4th movie doesn't work at all! Care to shed some light? =P

[TESM]

Little pissed...

such technical errors are so bad that i'm disgusted. for the ammount of work i put forth in my movie for it not to be shown just pisses me off to no end. Ruined my day. Razor, u need to get the hell over here and put my movie up!

the rest is very interesting, and Jz's was the best by far (although i think mine could contend)....

STILL: It sucks over 1000 people have seen this movie, but haven't seen mine, which is just hurtful in more ways than one. I'm really pissed razor. fix this shit quick ok? I think my movie is well worth watching, but ur not helping me out... very unprofessional.. and disapointing that all my work is almost for nothing.
thanks.

hurry up and get my stuff on.

[ChaosEnthusiast]

Man, wasnt as good as the last one..

I liked neverhooddrew's the best, Lip synching sucked i liked the art, the animation was fluid and i enjoyed it alot. Jszostak's was alright im sorry i didnt finish it cuz i hated the art but it went smoothly and i liked the atmosphere. Razor jam i liked yours better than your last one. Your animating abilities are pretty good, but still stick figures and random things are not that eye catching and entertaining to watch, I would recomend taking art classes if your unconfident about your work, but if your not then go for actual pictures and such. Tesm had this conversation before and you know what i hate about yours but i'll tell the audience so they can read this before watching the movie. Tesm, Tesm, Tesm! You need to desperately work on proportions! The heads of your characters are fine about half the time and huge the other half. I know you think your art is perfect but sorry buddy its not. No disrespect but honestly work on your attitude. Animation wise your movie was fluid but for the most part there was too much pausing between action and not enough fluidity if that makes sense. The others had constant motion and yours had too many dramatic pauses between the fight.

[BlackDevilX]

Alrighty Then Im going to give each one a review

RazorJam: Some pretty nice FBF animation going on there! Even had stick men in there. Good job to you

Jszostak: I cant explain this flash.....It was just so....messed up......anyways it was decent tho,

NHD: This was a nice lil flash with some sadness and depressing moments in it. I hop it didnt happen to you.

TESM: Heh so this is what you was working on! I have read some of the reviews before mines and it seems Im not the ONLY one who feels the same way about your attitude and jusgement..Dude What is with you drawing nude guys and all? This review from Omnilurk explains it all.

"Tesm, Tesm, Tesm! You need to desperately work on proportions! The heads of your characters are fine about half the time and huge the other half. I know you think your art is perfect but sorry buddy its not. No disrespect but honestly work on your attitude. Animation wise your movie was fluid but for the most part there was too much pausing between action and not enough fluidity if that makes sense. The others had constant motion and yours had too many dramatic pauses between the fight."

Im sorry to say this dude but yea he pretty much pinpointed exactly how you act. You seem to take little advice from people and seemingly always criticizing others...work on that before you work on your flash skill..remember your one user. Disrespect other user on this site and they wont take a liking to you.

Overall: A pretty Damn Sad and depressing flash movie. I think you all could do better in it. Try harder and strive to improve yourselfs

3/5
7/10
-BlackDevilX