yay
i've been reading about this in the BBS - it's finally out. yay! >:D
Reviews for "Amatuer Invisibility: 2"
Excellent
This turned out really well. My favourite was Jszostak's, the use of words was great and the animation was different. They were all cool. For some reason TESM's didn't play, which is a shame.
You mispelt the title by the way, it should by Amateur.
Well well.
In all honesty the only one I REALLY liked was TESMs, I saw it being developed from front to end and it was amazing. Let me analize.
RazorJam- I liked the smoothness, but it's the same thing you always do. Sticks and lines. Too un-original for my taste, and you probably could have put more effort in. 5.3/10
Jstozak- Clear message, pretty good animation, but really rough on the edges. Other than that, the shattered glass could have been FBF'd to look great. Your work is admirable and excells in clarity. Good job. 8.2/10
NeverHood- It's good to see that you put some time into it, however, it's very sub-par, verging on amature... but not entirely there. The tweened lip-synching was also a turn off, along with the consistent tweens. I do applaud you on terms with the song, you synched it really nicely. Still... The artwork was sketchy (VERY) and not entirely to my liking. Anyways, goodjob. 6.5/10
TESM- Don't misjudge yourself, this was superb by all standards. I know how much of a struggle it is to FBF that much work. So many things to say... Well, first of all, The timely expressions and animation, EVERYTHING you did syanch beautifully. The action and everything was just amazing... Just remember, "Teh Un-PROPOR Anatomy!!!1" haha, good times.
Peace, looking forward to seeing more work from all of you!
-JP
Hey Jszostak!
Cheers for using my track Upwnstairs in your Flash. However, It really has nothing to do with suicide or the fickle nature of the human soul. (It's your interpretation of the song, so fair play.) What my inner-child says in the song is to be interpreted literally! "I like to stay upstairs, where it's quiet, where it's cold, I hide away, I hide away, it's where I stay, It's where i stay." I used to live in a house that was a shithole downstairs and all my music equipment was upstairs, but in a room with no heating, the inner-child was cold. Hence the lyrics. Please do more animations for my songs. ttfn.
Wow
Drew matsons part was so farkin good, one of the few animations to a song that conveys such a strong emotion, if you submitted it by itself it probly would have gotten an even better score, not that the other parts were really bad.