It does have its charm
And some good animation. The movie by Neverhooddrew was particularly well done. Nice little grab bag.
Reviews for "Amatuer Invisibility: 2"
thats some great stuff right there
hmm, seems like there have been a couple of these collaborations around lately! - animating to something in the audio portal, its a good idea!
now, i would have given this an 8 out of 10... but TESM's movie doesnt freakin work! and the screenshot looked really awesome too! gah... o well, ill review the other ones :)
RazorJam - very fun to watch, yours was. i would say out of the 3 i saw i probably liked this one the most, because it was the least depressing! haha.
i quite like your style of animation, and it was pretty darn smooth. it looked really good on that background, but it just would have been so much better without the use of stick figures.
Jszostak - after spelling your name im inclined to write less! hahaha. i think yours was pretty darn good also. the graphics were great, and everything was really well drawn, and seemed pretty abstract. i very much liked your use of greys and blacks on the objects in the city.
the 'story line' of the animation was pretty good, and i was most pleased with the 'happy ending', haha. the song was also really good. it had a cool beat, and that little sped-up voice in the background was alright aswell.
NeverHoodDrew - an excellent song, and i was impressed that someone made that in the audio portal! its not very often that you come across a song with vocals like that in it on this site, so good choice. also, i think that the animation in this movie was awesome. the 'wind' effect on the character looked very realistic, and the fact that you made it seem as though the character himself was singing, made it all the more like a real music video.
on the whole, i was most impressed by all 3 of the available movies to watch here (stupid button for TESM's movie!). you all have unique styles of animating that went pretty well together, and the songs you all choosed were pretty cool. well done.
7.5/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!!)
Fix the TESM button!
Overall, the movies were much better than Amateur Invisibility 1, but I miss the ONE THEME, like you had in the first. I really liked the idea of picking one song/theme and seeing how people interpret it. This one was a little more broad and just didn't have the same effect.
RazorJam: Nice, smooth/random animation (as always) but no real substance to the movie. I'm guessing it's just the way you like to animate... 7.5/10
Jszostak: Good job! I really enjoyed it. There was just one frame where I thought it was hard to read what was written (background was too pale...) It was well done, but I think you can work a little more on your graphics (like when the guy walks...the train was good though). 9.5/10
NeverHoodDrew: Nice graphics and song, but I thought it needed more action. It's a little bland when the character is just singing more than half the time. I know it's suppose to be sad, and it's a music video...but you could put more scenes like the swing one (which was awesome). 8/10
PS: Are you going to write Amateur wrong everytime?!?!? Was it done on purpose this time, or was it another mistake? lol
Little pissed...
such technical errors are so bad that i'm disgusted. for the ammount of work i put forth in my movie for it not to be shown just pisses me off to no end. Ruined my day. Razor, u need to get the hell over here and put my movie up!
the rest is very interesting, and Jz's was the best by far (although i think mine could contend)....
STILL: It sucks over 1000 people have seen this movie, but haven't seen mine, which is just hurtful in more ways than one. I'm really pissed razor. fix this shit quick ok? I think my movie is well worth watching, but ur not helping me out... very unprofessional.. and disapointing that all my work is almost for nothing.
thanks.
hurry up and get my stuff on.
Man, wasnt as good as the last one..
I liked neverhooddrew's the best, Lip synching sucked i liked the art, the animation was fluid and i enjoyed it alot. Jszostak's was alright im sorry i didnt finish it cuz i hated the art but it went smoothly and i liked the atmosphere. Razor jam i liked yours better than your last one. Your animating abilities are pretty good, but still stick figures and random things are not that eye catching and entertaining to watch, I would recomend taking art classes if your unconfident about your work, but if your not then go for actual pictures and such. Tesm had this conversation before and you know what i hate about yours but i'll tell the audience so they can read this before watching the movie. Tesm, Tesm, Tesm! You need to desperately work on proportions! The heads of your characters are fine about half the time and huge the other half. I know you think your art is perfect but sorry buddy its not. No disrespect but honestly work on your attitude. Animation wise your movie was fluid but for the most part there was too much pausing between action and not enough fluidity if that makes sense. The others had constant motion and yours had too many dramatic pauses between the fight.