it could be worse
you should keep an eye on that jumping... it was very crapy...
Reviews for "Character Test"
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
yeah i agree
ehhhh
I like that cool little fire dude, but pip was just well... boring
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
u think, but then i havn't done much with him, i will have to make him more interesting for you, and ill put fire in at some point to blow him up Muhahahaha!!!1
...Cool...
Not bad, albeit a little rough. The "nod" and "yawn " animations were good, whilst your "jump" and "walk" animations were rather poor. What could help in those areas is a little more attention to details. Prior to jumping, you could have the dude crouch waay down; lower his head, outline the legs to make 'em visible, swing the arms up, show effort and concentration on his face, etc. For walking, involve some back and forth motion on the feet instead of just going side-to-side, have the arms sway, move the tail around. Little things like that may seem insignificant and look like a lot of work, but, trust me, it goes a long way. Peace.
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
yes seems every thinks the jump needs improvment, i didn't add any facial expression that sounds like a good idea will keep that in mind,yes the arms were surpposed to go up but i forgot *cries* im srry i kinda cheated on the tail *hides* ill will make it better :D
thnx for ur review
What was the point of submitting this?
That was dull! And the music was painful! What did you hope to contribute? That was utterly useless. I understand you're just starting out as a flash animator, and the work itself was rather good, but you're not supposed to post demos because they're no good. Seriously.
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
for feedback, without beging really loud music is not painfull, so moron turn ur speakers down then the nasty music wont be painful anymore, *looks fakely understanding* i wasn't really contribruting at this point i wanted feedback so when i do submitt a film with pip it will be better for your enjoy, no im am Useless :D nice to meet you, why u may not like it, this piece had perfect scripting all the button and links and loops everything work HA, no im not just started off i've just relied on tween too much which is why my fbf is crap,its not a demo, its a self standing intereactive piece, i am perfectly aware of the portal rules i'll have you know
Well if you are begginer
maybe next time will be better
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
im doing the best with what i can do >_< if thats not good enoguh for some people im srry but too bad Haha!!!1