It was ok.
I guess I can't expect much from a character test. The character looked alright, It nose sort of looked like a mouth though. I think you might want to work on the walking animation a bit more too, it looked like a very stiff waddle. The yawn looked good.
yeah walking sucked, this was just something to practice on, the more i practice the better will get
Amazed
I myself am amazed that this survived. Not that this is horrible or anything like that. I have seen other things like this not survive. So kodos to you. The Yawn looked more like a roar. You should work on the tweening of your characters, a bit more. I think you could use this character is some sort of story. UI think if you follow some of the suggetions I have seen you will just do just fine.
mw 2 to, it is horrible don't lie, on the whole the majortiy didn't seem to like him so i kinda scrapped it
Okay
Your animations aren't bad. Pretty damn good. For this though, maybe having another character involved in it. Like when he yawned, someone could have said he had bad breath or something. But alright all in the same.
prehaps but it was based around him i hadn't designed any charcters to go with him
wtf mate??!!
Ummm.. sorry but you shouldn't submit character tests to Newgrounds. This is a website meant for viewers enjoyments, not a testing site. The music really fit in with the animation and drawings. The buttons are cool, shinyy... Also, you need to work on the actions, kinda lame, a little movement. Nice try.
Newgrounds is full of flash animators making it the perfect place to request feedback
Well...
I first would like to talk about the movie disregarding the song. The character was drawn marginally well. I think that you really need to study motion a little bit more if you actually plan to use this character in other movies. It is cute, but when it yawned, it looked kinda evil.
Ok, now the song. "Enjoy the Silence" is an awesome song! It was much cooler to hear it done that way. I don't know if you did it or not, because you did not credit Depeche Mode, or whoever covered it, but it was really cool!
Now whether or not the song actually fit into your "test", I really didn't like it here. I thought it detracted from the test experience. I would have used a much faster song.
Anyway, I hope to see this character in upcoming movies, cause he looks cool, and if his personality is based on looks, then I will be anxiously awaiting.
Good luck...
thnx, i would have put credits for the song but i don't know who the cover band is so couldn't