Getting better every time
It is a new spin from the old version, sounds more medieval and gothic with the new drum sequence. Only thing i could see being added to thins song, is maybe an acoustic nylon stringed guitar or lute xD.
Honestly i really don't know how your going to make this better, but that doesn't mean you can't. I thought the same on the last versions and still you made them better.
Oh and just for dude09's sake it is going in a game. lmao xD