Reviews for XIN Session 06

[artificial]

Well

Frist off, the backrounds were very well graphiced. It was a nice idea to have the gray tone along with the fading of to the horizion. Voice acting would be have helped out a bit and add a nice tence affects to it, but the characters expressions explianed there thoughts well. The animations were well done, and even with out voices lip sync was solid. Also the fights scene was very well done, and the violence and quick paced affects were good. The storyline of the movie to have Xin draw a crowed during the midst of the battle was creative. Also the black line affects added that tence actions

Overall an intresting flash with some good animations and a nice story. Some sounds and voice acting would help, but music was well selected and the plot was well flowed.

Lifepoint1 responds:

Thanks for the comprehensive review Artificial.
About the music, it was composed exclusively for the session. I made the song myself, using a program called Reason 2.5.

[Akula]

Very well done.

Nice, Good smooth Animation there. The characters did have these sharp edges but i will take that as atype of drawing style. The music composed by you, fit's the situation(Tention etc.). And the backgrounds were well drawn, and a nice mist effect you did there. The fightscenes were nice, although voice acting would be welcome. I Can Imagine it with voices and in my thoughts it sound a lot better. Also voiceacting helps to determine the pase of the lips, sometimes i had this feeling as if the character was moving his lips to long. The atmosphere within the movie was really nice, i really got into the movie and started to feel the characters. The interruption of the fight keeps the tention within the person watching this movie. Maybe this is a negative side effect but that interruption does give the viewer a feel to see the next episode coming out(if there will be any more).

So maybe work a bit on your drawing skills, als a bit more detail within the Bbackgrounds would be appreciated, and a smooth character outline aswell. Overall a very good submission, and by far better then the average portal submission.

Akula

Lifepoint1 responds:

Thanks for the comments, Akula. They were very helpful. The next session (07) is already completed, and as for the art, we are planning to do a complete overhall on everything, and refine all the images after we complete the first season (Session # 09). Voice acting however, seems a bit harder to obtain, since we don't know alot of good actors around us. Also, thanks for the comment on the music :). Hope you have a great year.

[cloudstriff303]

Dont listen to Dark Demise

This is a good peice of art with session 1-5.
Try to make 7 as fast as you can with it still being good.

[fu2foo2000]

yes....... i too can pop my elbow back in

hehehehe

[Master-Naruto]

I know its suppose to be fantasy but...

Why don't the students get arrested or at least kicked out of school.other than that this is a great series, good job.