Music was alright, but the animation needs work...
Overall, this wasn't a bad piece. What was most dissapointing was the animation - not exactly the best. The song was fairly good, however. I also liked how, despite its brevity, the piece still had a strong message to portray. With some work on the animation and perhaps a little more clarity to the song, this could be a masterpiece. But as it is, right now it is only at the "shows potential" stage.