You have potential
You have a lot of potential for this series, but what will it be? You haven't chosen a direction, though it may not be necessary. Try to keep a proper story going and you will be great.
Reviews for "Julia-The Hot Flight Girl"
Movie can't seem to figure out what it wants to be
The main thing that needs to be improved upon is the story. It's rambling and incoherent, every once in a while giving us a good-humored nudge to remind us that we're watching a comedy. And a lot of the time, the movie is just... loud noise.
I can see something taking shape, and hell, for all I know, it could be very interesting. But as of now, I'm left a little bit confused as to what I just watched. Your style is wonderful--the split screens, namely, and toggling between fleshed out characters and stick figures--and the drawings aren't bad, either. I'll give you that. And I think you took some pretty interesting steps in creating a new type of shot/image for the audience to look at.
But I can't help but feel like I'm being yelled at by the characters, by the action, by the story, by EVERYTHING, and feeling confused as to what genre you want for this to be (comedy is what it leans toward, but you also seem like you want some corny, semi-serious Michael Crichton action stuff in there, too). My advice to you for the next installment would be to slow things down a bit, and let the conflict sink into the viewers' heads a bit more. But by and large, keep up the good work.
no... please no...
dont even make a "season two"... this was horrible, shit story, shit drawing, shit voices, shit everything. just one big ol' zero for you.
bad
this is a relly bad short movie
blam
that was way to long to load in way to much mb for a 1 min video! the deleted scene is the only good part! but she is hot when they show here naked! thats wat got you a point!