YOUR STILE BE GREAT
YOUR USE OF SPLIT SCREEN ACTION IS RARE ON NEWGROUNDS I HOPE YOU GET AN AWARD FOR THE SOUND MAY BE LOW QUAL AND THE PICS LOW QUAL THE OVERALL MOVIE IS A TOP!
THIS BE A GOOD FLASH IN ME EYES BECUASE IT TAKES ON THINGS THAT OTHERS WONT. LIEK 4 ANIMATED FRAMED AT ONCE.
GOOD WORK.
YARRRR.
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Wow. You're not half-bad at this whole flash bit. Make sure you make a conslusion. But the story dosen't make sense.
Quite good!
That was a really good flash movie. The only thing I suggest is that you fix the page with the ''play'' button. There are two buttons, one on the top center of the page and the other closer to the bottom on the left side of the page. Good job!
Okay
That was okay. The animation was decent, but I didn't get what was going on, and the voices (volume and acting) can be improved upon.
I saw sex in the clouds.
It was a pretty decent flash.
Haha, so incredibly corny...
That was so incredibly corny, it was funny. Great work, can't wait for the conclusion!