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Wow. You're not half-bad at this whole flash bit. Make sure you make a conslusion. But the story dosen't make sense.
Reviews for "Julia-The Hot Flight Girl"
great, but some problems
wtf who were the bad guys why did they want to kill them?????? (???????????????????????) Oh well, great movie
Movie can't seem to figure out what it wants to be
The main thing that needs to be improved upon is the story. It's rambling and incoherent, every once in a while giving us a good-humored nudge to remind us that we're watching a comedy. And a lot of the time, the movie is just... loud noise.
I can see something taking shape, and hell, for all I know, it could be very interesting. But as of now, I'm left a little bit confused as to what I just watched. Your style is wonderful--the split screens, namely, and toggling between fleshed out characters and stick figures--and the drawings aren't bad, either. I'll give you that. And I think you took some pretty interesting steps in creating a new type of shot/image for the audience to look at.
But I can't help but feel like I'm being yelled at by the characters, by the action, by the story, by EVERYTHING, and feeling confused as to what genre you want for this to be (comedy is what it leans toward, but you also seem like you want some corny, semi-serious Michael Crichton action stuff in there, too). My advice to you for the next installment would be to slow things down a bit, and let the conflict sink into the viewers' heads a bit more. But by and large, keep up the good work.
Not bad...
but really graphic intensive -- 3.8 Megabytes or so for roughly 30 seconds of video? The deleted scene was probably the best thing about this. I'm giving you a 6 because I think it has a lot of potential from where you have it right now. The next episode should go way more into detail about how these characters know each other or the chain of events that led to the showdown in the bedroom.
KillerKane responds:
thanks i found ur review helpful accept 30 seconds? more like 4 mintues, dumbass. And i will go into detail more in the next episode.
Ok...
Good job. However, the filesize seemed a little too big for the length of the movie, and i found it a little wird how you mixed sticks with non sticks. Anyway, keep up the good work.