Well now...this isn't that bad :).
First off, great job on the lyrics...they are surprisingly fantastic. This is like country in the way that it tells a story...but I can see why it is in classical.
But though this is quite good, your 00:27 area brought up something that was more dramatic, which is good, especially with this song. But I was waiting for some drums to kick in. 01:07 perhaps? I don't know how to explain in words how it should sound...but I believe that this piece could be even better.
I dunno =.=.
The voice (your voice :]) sounds quite good...but though it fits with the song to a point, I think that it should be clearer, it kinda sounds like there is a duel going on with another voice. Sounds good though o.o.
Great job, I just hope that it gets longer :D.
-AJ-