beautiful
where did you get the lyrics?
beautiful
where did you get the lyrics?
Great melody!
It's hard for me to find a track on here that has good vocals and music to go along with it. The piano really contributed to the song. This sounds like a professional song, you've got some talent. Great track you have here, keep it up and good luck with your future.
5/5
~Hemlok~
good work
I think most of us know this person
Nice
Needs better mastering the vocals were dull and had no brightness to them.
DJ-B
great work on this
The start of it actually sounded like puff the magic dragon to me. (yes, I was 6 years old once.)
"his silver falling apart" comes off as a bit strange... not sure how you'd tweak it.
maybe a simple change, like: "his memories falling apart- his siiiiillllveeer memories."