Much better than most peoples first submissons
I can see you spent more time learning than other people who submit crap onto here,urs looks quite good.
Reviews for "Hobbit Adventure Ep:1"
It was O.K.
It wasn't bad for you first submission but waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to short.
ughghggh
THAT WAS SO FRIGGIN HORRIBLE!! THAT SUCKED
good
too short though
nice
next time make it longer