Good First Effort
This wasn't bad for a first effort. Keep reading up on how to improve things and I am sure that you will get better and get a lot better scores.
Reviews for "Hobbit Adventure Ep:1"
Not Bad
Good attempt. Try adding faster action on the next one!
Good Job
For your first flash I am very impressed, Good Job. "I'm off like a prom dress"
What the?!?!?!
Was that supposed to be like the movie?!? Or... was it a story on its own, why would you submit something so short without any kind of plot. The sword training was kinda cool, but work or a story, or make a way better fight.
hobbits a planty
I really hope you are going to
a) make it longer
b) Improve sound
c) further explain the plot and story
d) Give your characters names.
It shows promise, I love the whole Tolken trilogy and the hobbitsare reall interesting subjects, so keep trying, and you will improve!
-A-
LiquidH responds:
They are gonna be longer for shure!
And the caharacters have names:
Hambut Proudfoot
and
Drogo Bramble of Willowbottom
Thanks for the preview