Very good !
I am impressed. Most first submissions are crappy, litteraly shitty stick figures getting killed by rectangular cars. But THIS, THIS, was truly marvelous. I liked it very much. However, use a spellcheck or e-mail me (I am a very (Still, some people will hate me or be jealous (Well, maybe not.) for saying VERY) ,good corrector, and I love doing it. However, I AM human, and I sometime do mistakes as well.). Also, I liked the fact that you needed to click for the text to load. Some people are reading VERY slowly, (Not to mention my friend Kamil) and need about a min. to read 3 lines. That was good. Also, the fight was good, but at some point, you saw 3 (?) arms !
Nice ideas though. Good luck for your next. I am looking forward to see you post another one submission of this soon-to-be series.
Sincerely,
Ultima_Phoenix