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Reviews for "_-={Mighty Hails}=-_"

A person seeking revenge is stopped...

Hello Maestro. A very good piece you have made here. I am impressed. Your passion and talent for this continues to grow to no end as far as I can see. Here's the story I decided to write for this. Enjoy. A group of warriors returns after seven long years of combat and war. They gather around their loved ones at the center of the village and begin to tell their tales of war. How some survived, how some died, and how some found what all find of the battlefield. Some find religion, some find rage, others find a sense of purpose. As for the warriors? They found a reason to have to return to and protect their village. One boy suddenly stand and asks in a worried tone, "Did my father...did he survive?" The group lower their heads slowly and then shake their heads. The boy is horrified and then asks in a furious tone as to who killed his father. The leader of the group tells him that the King of the opposing army was the one who murdered his father. The boy grits his teeth and storms out of the center only to be followed and stopped by the leader of the group.
"What are you planning to do?"
"I'm going to kill the bastard that murdered my father! That's what!"
"And what would you gain by that? Even if you did succeed in killing him your heart would be just as empty as it is now. The path of revenge is the path is the path of a fool. Don't throw away your life."
"How would you know anything about how I feel!?! My mother is already gone and now my father is too! You don't know a thing! Maybe if I killed someone, everyone who mattered to you, you would have an understanding of how I feel!"
"Hmm...an interesting theory. One that could be considered worth trying. However, you're a bit late to test it. Everyone that you're referring to has already been killed." The boys angry look is quickly replaced with look of shock mixed with sadness. He lowers his head and quickly sees the foolishness of his words. "That's right. You're not the only person on this planet that has lost someone precious to them. I wonder...how would your father look on you now if he saw you as you were...hmm." The boy nods and turns back from the way out of the village and walks slowly and solemnly back to the center to reflect his heart and find a true path. One that would make not only his mother, but his father proud of is life. Keep up the good work...

MaestroRage responds:

Thank you for dropping by Zen!

It is actually quite surprising. Your story and mine overlap on SEVERAL points. In mine the returning groups leader and a older limping brother greets him, and asks about his younger brother who marched with them.

This song, is the story of that brothers death, and his journey to try and survive, but ultimately, fail.

"Some find religion, some find rage"

I really liked this part of the story. Because it is true on many levels. Others find regret, and mourn what they have done, and many who cross the line of insanity too often to survive, are left with black scars that forever demand bloodshed, and madness from them. Torn to live a life of peace afterwards, the survivors of this horrible curse will now start the ongoing battle of having to resist fighting and killing. A fight they will take on for the rest of their lives.

I also quite liked the response of the leader when the boy demanded how he would feel if his own family were killed. Such is the quality of a leader, to be able to withstand torrents of emotions, while maintaining a steady head, and clear view.

A brilliant story Zen, thank you for writing it, and again for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

Ouch...

My prideXD You are horrible...stop making such good songs ><. But yeah...I like the voice used and the overall melody flows very nicely.

Great job ^^,
-AJ-

MaestroRage responds:

:(

I didn't mean to hurt you. I apologize! If it makes you feel any better, I had to kick 50 furry woodland creatures to get the sadness needed to create half this song :'(

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

And we return.

Let's praise all as we have finished the war, standing and breathing.
We come not in the great amount in witch we left.
Yet we come in single files, some shatterd, others joyful.
Let us bow low for several moments.
For the young, old and middle-aged for who have fallen.
New and experianced, none are immune to they might of metal.
We shout "They have fallen! We stand now, their sacrafice has not gone to waste."
So let none feel sorrow, they shall not stand, yet they are relieved of the world.
Relieved of the pain that they stood against daily, sickness and emotional pain.
We shall rejoice more as the days pass and so will the spirits of the fallen.

MaestroRage responds:

amen :')

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

Power !

Simply epic composition !

CELTIC TUNES

im just gonna be that itch you can't scratch till it happens ooh and i just faved and downloaded