Maybe its just me but...
This was just plain lame...
I appreciate a good fart joke, but come on...this was going a bit overboard
Music was ok, but that's it.
But Ive seen worse...a LOT worse...
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I took some advise, for example the womans arms are no longer as big as Hulk Hogans. I will likley edit it more and touch up the animation when I have more time. Thanks for the input. I do not know what I can do about my age.... sorry corkomatic.
funny
It's a funny and unique idea. This could be a hilarious series, but you might want to make him more deadly! Good job, keep it up...
halboski responds:
Thank you, any ideas on how deadly?
Almost funny... just decent!
The idea of a hero born from the shit of someone who has ate disgusting things is interesting... BUT:
1)I think that you did not use enough the full potential of the smell. Its principal strenght (bad smell) should give more violent effects more than throwing out!
2)Do you think that french fries and beans are disgusting? For me, disgusting food is like bread with full of little blue mushrooms or a steak in putrefaction and full of green worms.
Technically, the graphics were not terrible and need improvement. The style is decent and not very original; you should work on developing an original one.
The sound was cool. The music is interesting and amusing.
Humor and violence were deja-vu.
Finally, the concept is good, but you did not work enough on it. Moreover, improve your technical skills. Don't give up! :P
halboski responds:
-The stink should have had more effect.
-I wanted the food to make gas and be gross.
- the beaver and donkey were the gross.
_ I did the animation with my 5 year old crappy mouse, I need a light pen. Thanks for the constructive critic stuff.
poop
yeah,thats a concept I would've come up with when I was 10.....eh,it was stupid and it seemed that most of the square pictures of food he was eating werent really disgusting except for the animals of course....
halboski responds:
We all have a ten year old inside us, laughing at toilet humor. Of course it normally does not fight crime.... I am just weird.
Did that happened to you..?
Even when I found the art a little.... er, well, not the best I have seen, and watch this with a very open mind, I still didnt found this funny at all... Sorry I tried, but I just dont LMAO.
halboski responds:
It only happened to me once.
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