funny
It's a funny and unique idea. This could be a hilarious series, but you might want to make him more deadly! Good job, keep it up...
Reviews for "Smell my Justice!"
halboski responds:
Thank you, any ideas on how deadly?
heh, the stench
sickening. very sickening. to begin with i thought this was real bad, but hey it got better. maybe one day flash artists will make a parody fight between this stench and...i dunno - mario.
halboski responds:
The Stench!! I like it. THE STENCH VS MARIO. Maybe.
heh
that woman didn't need the "hero's" help. Her arms were twice the size of the escaped convict
halboski responds:
That is hilarious! You are right, she has huge arms!!!
heh heh
Kind of reminds me of that episode of ren and stimpy with "stinky" in it
halboski responds:
I have been found out!!!!! I was also influenced by feed Mr. Puke!
Almost funny... just decent!
The idea of a hero born from the shit of someone who has ate disgusting things is interesting... BUT:
1)I think that you did not use enough the full potential of the smell. Its principal strenght (bad smell) should give more violent effects more than throwing out!
2)Do you think that french fries and beans are disgusting? For me, disgusting food is like bread with full of little blue mushrooms or a steak in putrefaction and full of green worms.
Technically, the graphics were not terrible and need improvement. The style is decent and not very original; you should work on developing an original one.
The sound was cool. The music is interesting and amusing.
Humor and violence were deja-vu.
Finally, the concept is good, but you did not work enough on it. Moreover, improve your technical skills. Don't give up! :P
halboski responds:
-The stink should have had more effect.
-I wanted the food to make gas and be gross.
- the beaver and donkey were the gross.
_ I did the animation with my 5 year old crappy mouse, I need a light pen. Thanks for the constructive critic stuff.