Hey you do have talent but...
That was a really really short flash! I liked how he diced the guy and gave him the uppercut of fate but the graphics need some surgical work! But other than that it was ok.
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For this i want your feedback, no matter how critical....just not absurdly mean. This is going to be the next episode in my Prelude to the Fight episodes, but THIS IS A TEST, you who review tell me if you like it or not, vote high please so i get a chance to see every1's feed back, but you get to tell me what you want if you dislike where this episode is going.....so if you want me to add what you like, vote a semi-high score.....thank you!!!!!!!!
FUCKIN AWSOME!
DONT LISTEN TO ALL THESE PPL! U GOT TALENT! AND POTENTIAL! THAT MOVIE WAS FUCKIN AWSOME! I WANNA SEE MORE FROM YOU!
NewAnimator responds:
Thanks Sam, but for those of you that dont seem to get it, this is just a sample. There was no point for sound b/c this isnt actually the 2nd episode, i wanted to c what you thought of it and what you wanted to change, no detail was really actually put in... So those who give advice....you r awesome, those of you who just say annoyin shit b/c u didnt like it, FUCK YOU
Wow this is a practice not a test.
Well lets see, You draw one character but do a stick man for another...that's been done, think of something more original. The action: Unless you want matrix slowed down special effects, is too slooowww. Try turning up the FPS to 15 or 18.
How about a background? You need to spend some time getting down the basics before you submit something like this again. Practice, Practice, Practice.
Needs major development
I really hate giving low scores, I really do! but here I just have to, sorry!
It definatly needs a preloader sequence and PLAY button cause I only say up until his head came back down. There it stopped loading it 4 some weird reason, either that or the movie finishes there but I can't tell.
In overall comment and due attention needed it certainly needs sounds, more graphic quality, that preloader and PLAY button i was talking about, much MUCH more detail and definatly speech of some kind (either text or audio).
Sorry for the low scores!
I don't
I don't like it.
You do?
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