Don't pursue this. Just start from scratch :(
Sorry, but this really doesn't seem like it aspires to any kind of greatness at NG. The graphics aren't very impressive. There's no story and no real reason to build a story upon this. I just don't see anything really great coming out of this. You could edit and re-edit but in the end it's just not very interesting. Keep trying.
Humm..
first of all,in my opinion,stick figures are getting excessivly old...so try to add up some flesh on it..second:why does the guy kill mister stick?no plot no nothing??? it needs alot more animation...ALOT more..even if it takes you 2 extra month to make it..be sure its fluid...
Dont forget to add a soundtrack and some sound effects too...mister stick shouls AT LEAST TRY TO DEFEND HIMSELF before getting sliced to pieces..what else? a background would be nice...a dark alley maybe? with throwable garbage cans or cats! lol
im giving you 5 because everyone deserves a chance and i belive in your work..hope you amaze me later on! oh! and by the way: dont forget about facial expression! not only when being hitted..they should at least show to the foe that they are angry!
Good luck!
Phe...
You could have used some ActionScript (maybe a preloader too), and not not have this movie so unproffesional before submitting it, even if you say the real thing will be better, this is your first impression (not good).
Don't bother making crappy demos, just make the game and submit it, you don't have to know if they want it or not, newgrounds is huge, someone's bound to enjoy this, me however, NO.
Not horrible but not great either
If you put some sound. Made it longer. Gave it better animation you could make something. Some of your lines are kinda thick or they are too squiggly. Something just doesnt seem right. Work on it and you could probably make something decent. But its gonna have to be ALOT better than this. I gave you a 2. At least I didnt blam :)
omfg first one way betta
omfg dude i think i member your first one with just lines it was so much better