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My Husband Betrayed Me Over Chicken! Storytime

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I made This For Our Wedding Anniversaries.
I'm not Really Good at animation so i made it a Story-time video
So i can get my feet wet i really enjoyed it and i push myself to try and make look like anime. Since that all i'm really good at.
I would love some DEEP FEED BACK on how i can improve and make even better animation!

Please Check Out My art Work
I Only have A Twitter Instagram And Of Course Youtube
MY YOUTUBE:https://www.youtube.com/zippkey_YT
MY TWITTER: https://twitter.com/zippkey_YT
MY INSTAGRAM: https://www.instagram.com/zippkeyig/

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Interesting story

The overall animation was good, but the narrator can't change her voice tone accordingly to the text emotions that not surprisingly change. Same for the music.

Zippkey responds:

This is a valved point. I'll keep that in mind when i do more voice work. I'm not really sure what i can about music since i'm no export i can proudly not add music next time LOL. But Thank for the feed back!

CHICKEN?!

"and then i realize the bag was empty" god damn that killed me, i know that boy got killed that night

Well that was fun. :) How the little things turn into big things... relatable relationship raffles. Yeah.

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