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Still Spineless: The Tomb

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This is episode 3 of Still Spineless, watch the first two episode here:
1: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/665359
2: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/682993

The citizens report strange noises echoing from the old tomb, buried in the forest. Vincent investigates.

Cast:

Deathink: ( https://deathink.newgrounds.com - https://twitter.com/deathink )

Piper: ( https://twitter.com/PiperFaye - https://www.piperfaye.com )

Thanks for watching and happy Halloween

https://twitter.com/Ant0nMichael

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Check out this amazing Vincent artwork by Deathink: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/deathink/vincent

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Wow, Vincent sure has changed. He's cooler this way. Makes me wonder if this is a flashback, but it can't be because Jennifer seems to be the same age. You probably just decided to make him cooler. Anyways, the animation was great, and I really like the more realistic style. The tomb itself could have been a lot cooler though. Just felt kinda overlooked. Jennifer's constant yelling of "Vinnie!" got on my nerves a little. She's like "Are you okay?", and no, of course he's not okay, he is at least 40 and he has fallen down a bunch of stone steps headfirst. I mean, it turned out that he was relatively okay, but still. If she sounded a bit more worried that would have been nice. And she sounded like she was reprimanding him for falling when she said "Vincent!" And couldn't she run down there and get him another torch? It's not so spooky you can't even enter the stairway. Then again, that wouldn't be very scary. I guess there was an agreement that he was the one who should go down, considering all the others waiting outside and scattering. I did like the tree though, and the way it's making him think he's turning into a tree. It would have been cool if you just left it at him actually becoming a tree, but you showed it's all in his head. That's cool.
Overall, I dig the style change, and it had some cool moments, but it could have been a lot cooler.

AntonM responds:

Hey thanks for taking the time to write these reviews for the older eps, I really agree with you about how things are a bit too slow sometimes and that I could push things further. I need to make things a little clearer too but still maintain some sense of mystery. Anyway thanks again for reviewing the toons and I hope you liked 4 :)

Wow your animation style is improving in big leaps. Almost to the point where some characters are hard to recognize. Specifically comparing vincent from episode 1 to now but it's a good thing. i love every bit of this can't wait for episode 5

ANIMATION LIKE THIS IS WHAT PEOPLE SHOULD BE WORKING ON MAKING AND TOWARDS TO WITH FLASH. I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ANIMATION AND YOU CAN SEE THE HARD WORK THAT WENT IN TO MAKING IT. GOOD JOB.

oooo cool! Will there be follow-up???

Not bad. If you really looked at the story objectively not much happened other than some guy slipping and falling downstairs to be turned into a tree by some kind of tree monster. Where you really got the points was the presentation. I loved the atmosphere you've portrayed. Great animation and sound effects, it was chilling and dark, well timed for the season might I add but I wanted to know more of the painfully slowly advancing plot line. Keep it up!

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