Holy SHIT that was amazingly done!
The soundeffects were fitting though most of them harmed the atmospere slightly, the way I feel.
there were some unnessecairly lenghts that make it hard to follow. If you woul dhave filled the lingering lenth with light body movments that imply mental procession, it wouldn't have felt that way.
Starshine, Friend. My stars shine for you

Watched this in my bedroom in the dark, on my phone. The visuals were quite a treat, especially while watching it in the dark! Really brought out the whole constellation aesthetic ahah.

I think about everyone mentioned it already, but the pauses were a little too long at times. Is there any reasoning for this? Dynamically, it doesn't really play out well, especially since nothing much really happens in those pauses.

All in all, I loved it. I appreciate the amount of detail on filling the constellation particles on the Geminis! Amazing what you could still do with 2D.

The pointillistic style of the combatants was beautiful and I liked how they moved in the fight scenes. I always think it looks neat when people and things in action seem to drift across the screen.

I got the sense of some sort of mythic struggle between divine powers, as with constellations in the heavens. I'm not good with naming constellations, but even before reading the comments I thought it might be Gemini. This did confuse me a bit though, since I'm not aware of any conflict the Gemini twins would've fought against each other. Also the woman at the end with the arrows: what was up there? More info on the actual story would be nice.

My only other minor complaint is that there were a couple pauses that didn't seem necessary: after the combatants are reduced to just a shield and when the woman is looking down at the shield. But even these weren't too bad.

awesome

if you've made more stuff like this or on this level of quality, link them in a response to this review.

Well I liked it very much! It was very intresting to see a definite outline with undefinite form and imagine the details. Also the storyline, even if it was short, was intresting and with a twist. The fight scenes were also good and reminded me of some profesional work I 've seen over the years. But why did you let so much empty time run inbetween the "acts". That was something that felt very odd and kind of stained the quality of the other parts; mostly it destroyed the continuity of your story. Very good though, keep it up !!