Wasnt too bad. The jokes were nice, but it seemed they went on too long, or there couldve been more detail. You have something here, but its missing that one bit of animation that makes it magical and realistic. (I wouldve liked to see luigi running instead of gliding on the screen---see mario come knock the pipes on the side instead of them defying gravity and physics--- and the puke couldve been better, it felt rushed there) Keep trying for it, I can see these being nice. The best thing I can suggest is try to breathe more life into the characters.