Cute for what it is. I assume you're young, so I'll go easy on you. Start by keeping a proper aspect ratio throughout the piece. There is no reason why I should see white bars. Your animation is competent, but nothing special, especially since the sprites aren't made by you. Lastly the story... um... you'll improve with time.
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Hi there, this is my second animated video..
I want to know that is it improved from the last one or the last one was better?
Check it here.. :- :)
Jerry589 responds:
Thank you for your encouragement. I am trying to improve it and working hard. :) I have edited it to the real size. :)
Let's Fighting Love.
decent for a flash. But, there are quite a few complaints; the story is bland, combat gets a little repitive and boring, and the voice acting is bad. I know it's your second flash video but i have to give you my honest opionion
Jerry589 responds:
I have made this series to improve my flash experience. When it gets completed (3 parts), I will make a series with much better story-line and animation. :)