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Against The Evils-Part 1

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Hi there, this is my second animated video..
I want to know that is it improved from the last one or the last one was better?
Check it here.. :- :)


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Cute for what it is. I assume you're young, so I'll go easy on you. Start by keeping a proper aspect ratio throughout the piece. There is no reason why I should see white bars. Your animation is competent, but nothing special, especially since the sprites aren't made by you. Lastly the story... um... you'll improve with time.

Jerry589 responds:

Thank you for your encouragement. I am trying to improve it and working hard. :) I have edited it to the real size. :)

Let's Fighting Love.

decent for a flash. But, there are quite a few complaints; the story is bland, combat gets a little repitive and boring, and the voice acting is bad. I know it's your second flash video but i have to give you my honest opionion

Jerry589 responds:

I have made this series to improve my flash experience. When it gets completed (3 parts), I will make a series with much better story-line and animation. :)

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2.00 / 5.00

Feb 10, 2015
10:42 AM EST