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Rudolf's Revenge (Fixed)

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Uploaded
Feb 2, 2015 | 12:35 PM EST

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Hii.. This is my first ever animated video..
Please suggest areas to improve.. :)

Here is my channel and video on youtube.. :)

Video :- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_-JR6pphqDA

Channel :- https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCPSPfiRIfG6o5oJ2Rxmxj1w

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metroidfannumber1metroidfannumber1

Rated 4 / 5 stars

what a magical land of constant killing!


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Jerry589 responds:

Haha.. :) Thank you for your rating.. :)


VoltageVoltage

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well, you're getting there -- but what you will have to work on is better audio altogether that isn't one song, some SFX, more angles to your action sequences, maybe upload this in .swf format... maybe a little more time spent in telling the story. Keep at it though, you will get there soon.


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Jerry589 responds:

Yaa, I think that too.. I'll work on SFX's in the movie next to that I'm already working on.
This one was first uploaded in .swf but it was not working, so I re-uploaded it in .mp4..
Thanks! :) I appreciate your review!


KwingKwing

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

It's okay, as far as sprite movies go. You really need sound effects, and actual speech bubbles, as the text blends in with the background way too much. Voice acting would be nice, too. I also felt like this went way too fast as far as the dialogue and the action, with there not being a clear dividing line between the two. Also, use more than just one music track over the whole thing, it makes it feel like it's a montage rather than an animation.

Couldn't really grasp the story between the fast text and the colors clashing.


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Jerry589 responds:

Yes, I noticed the things you suggested.. I have a thread about what I think I need to improve.. :)

Areas I think that I need to improve:
1. Make the text longer so that one could read it.
2. Using Symbols(Graphic) for the animation.
3. Using Camera Movements.
4. Some more hard-work..


kaboghkabogh

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not bad for your first animation


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Jerry589 responds:

Thank You very much for your rating.. :)


BlackKitsune42BlackKitsune42

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

For a first animation, decent job. All I would recommended is that you make the character sprites a bit bigger (them seem small to there surroundings) and make the text easier to read by slowing it down and maybe making it bold.


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Jerry589 responds:

I am making the text bigger in my next movie. Hope I could post a pic here.. :)