For a first animation, this is amazing!
Thanks for using my music in this piece of art ;)
Unattainable
A dog tired of his routine and monotonous life, one night looks out the window and is intrigued by the mysterious glowy thing in the sky. He decides to leave everything behind to go in search of it. Along his way he encounters distractions that lead him astray but he manages to right himself. However he reaches his final hurdle and realsises that he will never be able to reach what he was searching for.
My first animation :)
Music by LucidShadowDreamer
Gullgull responds:
XD Thank you! And thanks for making such beautiful music! :)
Redo with alternate ending plz, more epic. We need backstory on why he can walk on watr! Liked the pacing tho.
Gullgull responds:
I see what you mean about the walking on water bit :D It was a shallow stream :) Funnily I did actually have alternate endings but they were all a bit morbid. Thanks I'm glad you liked the pacing
Thoroughly enjoyed this, I really did. It was just the right length and the quality of the drawing is very well done, you can tell you're not a beginner in that regard but the animation is a bit choppy which I find works in its favour for it being your first animation.
Music choice was impeccable and flawlessly timed with the video and let me just tell you, I have seen many peoples first time animations and this is the best I have seen in a long, long time.
I look forward to seeing your future productions!
Keep up the great work! 5/5 & favourited. :D
Gullgull responds:
Wow I really didn't expect such a great first review! Thank you! and I'm glad you enjoyed it, hopefully my next one will be less choppy :D
