Meh. It's your first game and unfortunately, very flawed.
Coincidentally, this review is my first ever Newgrounds post!
ART - Fine by 2012 standards.
STORY - A little simple but ultimately not important for this kind of game.
GAMEPLAY - Relatively bug-free which I have to give you credit for! The lack of animation or transition when you pass a level or die leaves something to be desired though.
MUSIC - Kind of ear-grating. Felt very rough.
LEVEL DESIGN - Kinda dull. Kinda confusing with the zoomed in camera as well.
OVERALL SCORE - 1.5/5
As your first game, it's a good attempt and you deserve credit where credit is due. But as a game it's only slightly less frustrating than those cheap mobile platforming games.